Wednesday, 6 July 2011

Talking about Tanka

The tanka is a poetic form with a long and rich history. It originated in Japan in the sixth or seventh century and quickly became that nation’s dominant poetic from. The first national poetry anthology, Man’yoshu, compiled in the eighth century, contains 4,500 poems, of which 4,200 are tanka. The 21 imperial anthologies compiled between 905 and 1439 contain over 33,600 tanka.

The Japanese word “tanka” means “short poem” or “short song”. True to its name, a tanka is a short poem consisting of five lines and 31 syllables. The lines are measured by syllables and form a pattern of 5-7-5-7-7 syllables respectively.

Arrangement of lines by syllables is a key feature of the tanka and this feature can be reproduced as effectively in the English language as in the Japanese. The 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure guides the phrasing of the poem and lends balance to not only the individual lines but also the poem itself.

Poets writing tanka in English today often abandon the 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure—and often create impressive poems in the process! It remains a moot point, however, as to why such poems should be called tanka as opposed to free verse.

In my own practice of writing tanka, I have viewed the 5-7-5-7-7 form as the ideal to beaimed for; but I have accepted that this ideal cannot always be attained. After all, the ultimate purpose of writing a tanka is to produce a poem. If the traditional structure gets in the way of the poem on a given occasion, then it should be abandoned or altered for the sake of the poem.

Within the 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure there is considerable flexibility of arrangement. Many of the Japanese tanka collected in the tenth century imperial anthology titledKokishu, for example, have a tripartite arrangement, with breaks (in rhythm and/or thought) after the second and fourth lines. Other tanka in the collection tend to be bipartite, with a break or shift occurring after the third line.

I have often employed this latter technique in my tanka. Here’s an example from my bookCounterpoise (Angus & Robertson, 1980):


An amber cricket

makes her way mechanically

across the concrete.

Eggs must be laid and there is

so much dying to be done.

As can be seen, this tanka falls neatly into two parts. The first part (lines 1-3) is primarily objective and descriptive, while the second part (lines 4-5) is largely subjective and evocative.

Here’s another example of a tanka arranged so that a shift occurs after the third line. (This tanka is part of my collection, The Colour of Life, in the book Two Poets, which is scheduled for publication by Fremantle Press in July.)


As I lift the mug,

light reflects from its glazing

in the black window—

faint and intermittent like

a lighthouse signal, far off.

While the incorporation of a pause or shift after the third line is an effective way to write tanka, it is certainly not the only way. Some fine tanka have no specific shifts in thought or pauses in rhythm but rather present a single unfolding statement. Consider this example (also from Fremantle Press’s soon-to-be launched Two Poets):


Lady, the lilies

we admired in the paddock,

the arum lilies

so whitely lovely, have died

from the farmer’s herbicide.

This tanka is essentially a single observation arising from the accumulation, line by line, of specific details (although it is true to say that the concluding couplet rhyme gives the impression of a shift from the first three to the last two lines).

Finally, consider an example of a tanka (also from Two Poets) that is somewhat irregular in its outworking. It is essentially a unified statement/image, and yet it contains a shift of sorts, and that shift falls in an unconventional place:

Bird and Bull

The dotterel,

stalking, sniping—so little

by the muzzle

and muddy hoof of the bull

drinking at the dam’s puddle.

“Bird and Bull”, like “Signal”, works by drawing a comparison, which is a typical tanka technique. Yet while “Signal” draws a comparison to bring out a similarity, “Bird and Bull” draws a comparison to bring out a contrast.

It is worth noting that the first and fourth tanka above deal with nature, while the second and third deal with human nature. This is one of the beauties of the tanka form: it is suitable for any subject and can capture any mood. Stylistically, it can be imagistic or lyrical or elegiac. Its versatility is limited only by a given poet’s imagination and skill.

It is also worth noting that these four tanka employ simple and precise language (as is best suited for tanka generally), and yet they are laced with literary devices. “Cricket” uses alliteration; “Signal” uses simile; “Lilies” uses apostrophe, repetition and rhyme; and “Bird and Bull” uses slant (or half) rhyme and alliteration. The tanka poet may use literary devices and figures of speech like any other poet. It is a mistake to think, as some do, that tanka must be devoid of literary devices. The tanka is a type of poetry, which in turn is a type ofliterature, and it should be treated as such.

Well, these are some ideas and examples to stimulate you to write your own tanka. Get on and give it a go! I look forward, with my co-judge, Wendy Jenkins, to reading your entries.

— Andrew Lansdown

Send us a copy of your best tanka to win a professional judge’s report by expert poetry editor Wendy Jenkins and poet Andrew Lansdown plus a complete set of Fremantle Poetry Month titles worth RRP$74.85.

Tanka submission guidelines

Submissions for the competition will open from 1 July until Friday 22 July. The winner will be announced on the Fremantle Press website, facebook page and blog on Tuesday 26 July. The winner will be notified by email.

The winner of the competition will receive a professional judges’ report from the Fremantle Press poetry editor Wendy Jenkins and poet Andrew Lansdown as well as all 2011 Fremantle Press poetry titles worth RRP $74.95.

Entries will only be accepted via email to within these dates. Only one entry per person will be accepted.

By entering this competition you agree:

Judges decisions are final and no correspondence will be entered into

Entering this competition does not guarantee publication

All work must be your own

The winning entry and report by judges Andrew Lansdown and Wendy Jenkins will appear on the Fremantle Press website, blog and Facebook page.

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